Spirit level.
three little bubbles
how can so much effervescence
be so flat?
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That's quite good, for him. Or anyone else. Well done nipdoggy.
Update 8th September - Tom feels his poem was quite good also... do i have it somewhere, he wants to get published and i want to help him... ach, cannae find it, need some sleepy time, mair later.
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The line breaks are reproduced according to "as received by email" format - need to consult with Ol' Nipdog himself as to whether those should be edited or not.
feck it, reads better, i'm sure that's how he wanted it... "effervescence", nae sense in that line break, mustabeen hotmail's idea.
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